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2013年4月13日雅思大作文真题:单独住还是跟家人一块儿住?

发布时间:2013-07-19 16:21浏览次数:1018[网页划词已开启]
要求:

As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what is this cause and what are the effects on society.

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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;文章层次较为清晰。

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Recently, "Where are we going,dad?"second is very popular.There was a set of programs which was Hulun Bwir Grassland,And it is my hometown that have fresh air,green lawn,herds of cattle and flocks of sheep. Relative to the first part,the second part upgrades in content and form.So it is more popular. In my opinion,this program makes father close their kinds which can help children grown up happier and heathier.And giving a chance for fathers to have a rest.

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