小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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i have a good teacher.she is beautiful teacher.she has long black hair,two big eyes and a red mouth.her voice is better.she is good at singing .she is clever.she likes reading books ,playing computer games and chess.she is also nice.she often help us.our classroom likes her very much.i like her very much