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Hi Mary Chen, I will go to Beijing one week for business affairs , so I can't talk about the matters of New years activity with other colleague. If there is something need we decision , you could decide on yourself including my part . Pls inform me the last decision of time and address and what I need to prepare. Best regards, Liming