小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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this is our holiday.it is nice and wonderful.it is warm world.all classmatesare like it.my mother likes cooking in the kicten/my father likes warerig flowers in the balcony.it is enjoyable to have a holiday like this.we sing songs in the sitting room.i had many woderful thing in the holiday.we read books and no=ewspaper in here.our holiday,our warm world