2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(53):城市怎样开始

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once upon a time,there are rarely people in the city and work on the go hunting.after they recognized how to plant,they settle down together and build the village.with the population increased and flocking into the village and develop the city.when the equipment appears and build the factory and more and more people settletment together.and then city become larger than larger