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The problems of traffic of city which involves jam, car accidents and breaking down of transportation rules have be concerned during the process of urbanization. Some measures to deal with these problems should be taken by government and citizens。 Adimitively, the number of people who own their own private cars are rising all the time, and consequent of this situation will be resulted that someone, especially workers often feel most of time have to be spent on transportation due to traffic jam, which will make their work efficiency slow down, and has obvious effect on their career. Besides, the quick pace of life has not allowed people to have leisure time, and busy work force them to drive cars as soon as possible, which will increase the rate of car accidents. Finally, polluted air released by cars also can cause environment problems that is difficult to recover and make people feel sick. Facing these traffic problems, as an unstable elements in society, what should we do to reduce the negative influence. Firstly, on the view of the government, some transportation policies should be made to avoid car owners violating rules and causing unnecessary car accidents. Secondly, the importance of mind of safety and environment preservation should be attached by citizens. In the conclusion, we should impose on the traffic problems that can bring about series problems from car accidents to environment pollution. The government and citizens should be joint to improve our transportation.
