小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is a girl. She is a beautiful and happy girl. She is the highest in our grade. She has a pare of big and bright eyes that every body hope for it in our grade.My friend is a girl. She is a beautiful and happy girl. She is the highest in our grade. She has a pare of big and bright eyes that every body hope for it in our grade.