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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
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Dear freshman, We will arrange one activity for the fall travels. The activities arrange as below: at the morning :we will visit the botanical garden and watch the exhitbiton of human and natural. at the afternoon:we will visit the palace palce . If want join this activity ,please enter your name at the student union before Thursday.And assemble on the school gate on 27th DEC. Pls be on time
