作者能较多样地使用词汇,学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
With the coming of TV,books are no longer read as widely as they once were.However.no one can deny the important role that books play in our lives.But different people have differnt view on reading.some people think reading should under a guideline,the right choice of reading can make reading more functional. However,the other people think reading should be wide.well-reading can broaden one's minds and lead to be wiser.The more read,the more acquire.So in their opinions,the wide reading can bring more benefits to one's mental improvement. As far as I am concerned,a well-reading habits can contrbutes to one's intelligent,nothing can replace the meaning of books in our lives.But we should also to realize that bad influences of some terrible books.So I think all of us should have a sensible principle of reading when we are choose books.it will be very helpful for our lives.