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It is not correct to come to a conclusion whatever you have seen or hearderd. Nowerdays people prefer to watch pictures than understand. You find there are many mistakes due to people's first feelings. It cause dislike, hate and dieguess. Such as stangers, if you like a dirty man, you will think he is not so good, maybe he will hurt you, then you have to go away from this man, even though you do not known anything about his just through approach. So if you were him, you will not like these judge. Don't come to conclusion at once, you must try to understand what happend, what kinds of the man, what is the meaniful. In my views ,understanding is the most thing in our lives. First if you see what,you must calm down and judge what is the point. you need to realize the whole thing, then think about carefully in your mind, use you experiences to judge the event.Finally you will do best to understand.
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