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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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I'm not very often exercise,the much of time is staying in my room.But i do some sport in my free time.Such as jogging which is my favorite sport.Because it is not violent,bear and it can be beared my body.I achieve much funny from jogging which include coutrol my weight and build up my healthy.This is the reason why regular physical exercise is important.
