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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中用词稍显贫乏；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。
I'm not very often exercise,the much time of my life is staying in my room.But I do some sport in my free time.Such as jogging which is my favorite sport.Because it is not violent,bear.It can bear my body.I achieve much funny from jogging which include control my weight and build up my health.This is the reason why regular physical exercise is important.
