小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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Their are XiaoMing is family's photos.XiaoMing is family have five people.His father and mother,His brother and sister.His father is a doctor,At his country his father is a very famous doctor.every people very love he.His mother is a farmer .She every day works in the farm.Farms have are fishs pigs and apples oranges .His mother is every hard in the work. His brother is two old any.He is clean.His sister is six old ,She is a primary student.She is good at study English.She is a good student.