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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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In today's social,unemployment rates more incresed.education pays is higher earnings lower unemployment rates.according the circumstance,i have some views. first,according above a diagram.we can discution unemployment rates lower is professional degree.and weekly earnings is also most higher.doctoral,master bachelor, associate,some college no degree or something of unemployment rates also on the increse. second,according this a diagram.we can looked unemployment rates most highly is high school diploma and less than high school diploma .why?i realive social development speed ,so high school diploma and less than high school diploma or something not social development finally,i realive lower unemployment rate and increse earning that hard study and hard work.
