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拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
For years,health attracts people's attention.Everyone aspires to have a healthy body.However,the number of people who are in bad condition is still unimaginable.What's the reason of this phenomenon.I suppose that what it is the way that they apply to stay healthy is unreasonable or inappropriate.The way used for staying healthy are diversity.The following I 'll list three common ways. To begin with,doing exercise is the necessary one,which not only can promote blood circulation,but also can make our figures elegant.Secondly,having a balanced diet is also very consequential.Quite a few people are on a diet so as to lose weight,which is truly stupid.Their slim bodies are at the cost of their health.From my perspective,it is unworthy and ill-advised.Eventually,if you want to stay healthy,you are bounds to realize the significance of preserving a good mood.No matter what you do,please do it with good mood. In conclusion,healthy is the most essential for all of us.Only having a healthy body,you are qualified to pursue other things,such as,money,reputation,high-paying job and so on.If you haven't,everything is unworthy to you.
