小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. He name is Panzaiding. He is twenty-three.He come from Thil. he was Chinese at two years ago. He have two big eyes. he is very fat.he live in Shanghai. he is a sturdent.he likes sports. he can say China and english.he went to taiwan,beijing, hunan.