小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

I have a good friend. His name is Panzaiding. He is twenty-three.He comes from Thil. He was Chinese two years ago. He has two big eyes. He is very fat.he lives in Shanghai. He is a student.He likes sports. He can say China and english.He went to taiwan,beijing, hunan. He likes China very much!