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字数：300 满分：100分
简单句偏多了；文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇，不过拼写错误比较多；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少。
To be Smart Conusumers With the rapid devolopment of the economic. There is public debate today how to be a smart consumer. Most of buyers.They cast collect all kinds of coupons .They look for group-buy deal if they eat or trovel.They buy clothers in sale. For most people. This seems not to be a smart consumers. For me .it not. First of all. Conpous and group-buy deals give consumers a advantage of saving money. There is the best wethod to save money is coupons and group-buy. As students .They have no way to get money expect from they parents. So tehy need a batter way to save thair money. In addition. Coupons and group-buy deals in the long run would make young peole for a good habit. Though this behabior. They can get how to ues the resources nearyby and know how to get more effect with lower cast. All in all. They buy things what they want or they need use conpous and group-buy. Choosing the right time. they can get more benefits. Only in this way can they be a thuly smart consumers.
