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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46274
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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In today's social,unemployment rates more increased.Education pays is higher earnings lower unemployment rates.According to circumstance,i have some views. First,according above a diagram.we can discussion unemployment rates lower is professional degree.And weekly earnings is also most higher.doctoral,master bachelor.Associate,some college no degree or something of unemployment rates also on the increase. Second,according this a diagram.We can looked unemployment rates most highly is high school diploma and less than high school diploma .Why?i think social development speed ,so high school diploma and less than high school diploma or something not social development accord. Finally,i think lower unemployment rate and increase earning that hard study and hard work.

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