Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;从句使用不熟练;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
In today's social,unemployment rates more increased.Education pays is higher earnings lower unemployment rates.According to circumstance,i have some views. First,according above a diagram.we can discussion unemployment rates lower is professional degree.And weekly earnings is also most higher.doctoral,master bachelor.Associate,some college no degree or something of unemployment rates also on the increase. Second,according this a diagram.We can looked unemployment rates most highly is high school diploma and less than high school diploma .Why?i think social development speed ,so high school diploma and less than high school diploma or something not social development accord. Finally,i think lower unemployment rate and increase earning that hard study and hard work.