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From what is vividly depicted in the picture,we can see distinctly that an oil lamp gives out bright flame which is like a child's innocent and pure smile against the dark background.Thus,the oil lamp is a symbol of love,which is the greatest among all the valuable emotions of human being.Just as the Chinese characters around the lamp say that love is a lamp;the darker the room is ,the brighter it looks.It is true that the harder the situation is,the more valuable love is.One good example to illustrate this love is the"Hope Project".As we all know,although our economy is much better than years of ago,a great gap still remains between east and west regions,between large cities and rural areas.Thousands of poor children are forced to quit school because of lacking of money.All works of life have worried about this situation."Hope Project",which is proposed just in time,calls for people to show their loves for those children who unable to go to school,and tens of thousands of people have lent their hands without asking for any return.The best way to show love,I think,is to be devoted to our work and our nation.Everyone is indeed unique loved by the people around,and therefore we must learn to love others,and try our best to shoulder the responsibility of the job so as to help others live better and make contribution to our nation.
