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With social and ecomomic development today. There is public debate today how to be a smart consumer. Most of the buyers.They cast collect all kinds of coupons.They look for group-buy deal if they eat or travel.They buy clothers in sale. Most people would agree that this seems not to be a smart consumers. For me .it not. First of all. Conpous and group-buy deals give consumers advantage of saving money. There is the best mode to save money by coupons and group-buy. Most of they, as students. They have no way to get money expect from they parents. So they need a way to save their money. In addition. Coupons and group-buy deals in the long run would make young peole for a good habit. Though this behavior. They can get how to use the resources nearyby and know how to get more effects with lower cast. All in all. They buy things that they want or they need use coupons and group-buy. Choosing the right time. They can get more benefits. Only in this way can they be a truly smart consumers.
