高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式变化多样；请注意分段。

behave civilized in the international contract is very important.so it is vital to improving national culture.such as some bad behavior in our life is often seen.do some judgement and suggest a advice There is a song ‘Tomorrow Will be Better’, I like to hear it so much, every time when I listen to it, I can feel the hope, even though I don’t feel happy, I will be positive to life. We will meet all kinds of difficulties, if we can hold on and keep move on, all the hard time will pass, the bright future will come sooner or later.