高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sports are play soccer,basketball,pingpong ball,tennis.But my best favoret sport is playing scooer ball . I like it by chance.At that time I pick up a soccer,so I play it with my friends.After that I fall in love with playing soccer. My best favorite soccer star is beckhan in The United kingdom.My dream is became a professional football player.