2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my best friend Damon will visit my hometown who is come from Canada. I should take her to Guangzhou Tower which is best of place in my mind. Maybe her will thinks that's a little be similar CN Tower which is highest in Canada and that's have a number of common. No one doubt that is similar view like skyscraper in those urban city. But when you standing in Guangzhou Tower that you can easy to know about Guangzhou culture which would like a gorgeous map in your heart.