2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my best friend Damon will visit my hometown whom my friend come from Canada. I should take her to Guangzhou Tower which is best of place in my mind. Maybe her will thinks which place have a great number of common. No one doubt is similar view like skyscraper in urban city. But when you standing in Guangzhou Tower that you can be easy to know about Guangzhou culture which would like a gorgeous view in your heart.