2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my best friend Damon will visits my hometown who is my friend come from Canada. I should take her to Guangzhou Tower which is best of place in my memories. probably he thinks that that have a number of commons. No one doubt is similar view like skyscraper in urban city.Nevertheless when you standing in Guangzhou Tower that he can be easy to feel Guangzhou culture which would like a gorgeous view in your heart.