2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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There are many intresting places in China, Such as shanghai, lijiang, dali , etal. My faverate place is my hometown, though it is small and poverty. Color sand of foreasts is the most beauty in my hometown, it is well known about it . I want to take you to see the special place. you can see veries sand sculpture arts at there, and you may find the sand have different coloures. The old people tell us that "The color sand of foreasts" is be found by accidentical, and it's becomed for a long time. This beauty place is the product of nature, so you can find natural beauty.