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Last weekend, i had a interview on “the Chinese student‘s opinions of sharing the feeling”with kelly Lam who is a professer of psychology. The result of the interview shows us that more than 30% of the students are unwilling to share their feeling with others no matter they are happy or not. From here we see that the education of our country did not make the students aware of the importance of sharing. According to the professor，it's very necessary for us to learn to share with others in today. What's more，the professor also point out that it will have a good effect on our future if we try our best to do it well.
