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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒。
Nowadays, the new ways of consumption are playing an imperative role in our daily life, we collect various kinds of coupons or look for group-buy deals, in order to save money. However, is the truth really like that? I do not think these things make us smart consumers. When we eat out or travel, we tend to carry coupons or group-buy deals with us, to a certain extent, they do cut down the price of lots of products, but also stimulate our purchase desire, we are in need of more products which we do not need because of the good bargain or low price. In this way, they can not help us to save money. I n addition, there are always many additional clauses attached to them, which we can hardly notice, sometimes you have to be in guarantee of enough sufficient products you have bought before you use coupons, that would not help us to ave money, but buy more things, in many cases we buy things that we do not need at all, these things can only expand your desire of purchase. In conclusion, we need observant eyes of consumption, otherwise, it can only make us to spend more money, you do not execute your original intension of saving money, so i do not think new ways of consumption make us smart consumers.
