2012年7月7日雅思大作文真题:广告对消费者的影响

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In modern society,commercial advertises has been considerable debated over whether they do encourage citizens to buy in quantity or promoting its product's quality.Some feel that advertising is just a means by which producers could intricate consumers to buy their products or services,while the view that advertising actually promotes its quality is also held by a majority of people.Whilst I believe that there are strong arguments on both sides,advertising do improve their sale amounts meanwhile their product's quality get better. Nowadays, various kind of advertising could be seen everywhere,for example,on TV,newspaper,etc,especially the internet.So wide a publication is there a definite trend that the consumption number would increase.However,with the technological and scientific development,consumers would be gradually capable of whether a stuff is good or not, so,advertising do better does not mean the amount of people purchasing goods is higher. In addition, there exist so many companies that every producer may take the huge competing pressure.If a stuff were not very satisfactory,there is no possible that consumers could not to buy it.The most important thing is people like to communicate with each other,what people say is really does count for others. All in all, I assume that advertising is just a publication means,which is not the key point the producers should pay more attention.Good quality is seriously significant.