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注意:字数:100左右。可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒。
In today,online shopping is becoming more and more popular with people. As we know,Not only can the online shopping bring us convenience because there are many kinds of goods we can choose on the internet but also it can save lots of money of us because the products online are more cheaper than physical store. In addition,it also help us save a lot of time because we can buy what we need just by opening the web page instead of walking to the physical store. Every coins has two side,online shopping also has an bad effect on our life. For example,sometimes,we bought the products which in low quality or beyond our expectation. What’s worse,sometimes we will be cheated by the owner of the online store. As far as I'm concerned,online shopping is convenient for our life in a certain extent but we still need to be careful to protect ourself from being cheated.