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2007年12月英语六级作文真题:Digital Age

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:29浏览次数:1692
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题目 Digital Age
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1.如今,数字化产品越来越多,如…
2.使用数字化产品对于人们学习工作和生活的影响
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;作者词汇量比较丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误。

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With the development of economy and technology,we can find a varity of digital products on the market,such as the intelligent phone,digital camera,note computer······No one can deny the truth that we are now living in a digital age. As it is,now more and more people have their own digital products,the digital products are play an important role in our lives.With the coming of diigital products,we are enter an information age.It not olnly improve the quality of our life but also increase the speed of social development,and it makes our life be more convenient.But at the same time,we should also realize the disadvantages of digiatl products.Many people are addicted to the computer games,and the numbers of people's eye sights damaged because overusing cellphones,espeically for students.Now the overusing digital product is an improtant factor of affecting people's physical health. All in all,the digital product is a maultfascited sword,we must be careful when we use it,and it will has a good effect on our lives if it can be used in a sensible way.

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