3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
句式变化多样;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
April 10 Dear Mr.and Mrs.Brown, I'm writing to you from my home in China. my name is licha,First,please allow me to say thank you for receive your letter,I'm glad to go to New Orleans as an exchange student and learn one year.Second,during the period of study,I will live with you,it is important for me to provide food、accommodation travel and tourism assistance,sometimes you can traval all around with me,after a year,I will come back,I wish to keep a touch and welcome you visit china,I'm very happy to hang out with you in china.finally,I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours faithfully, Li Hua