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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1890
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
用户的作文(系统评分56.5分
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从句用的不错,但有几处从句错误;全文结构较为严谨;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。

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It's necessary for us to know how to say "no"in every situation in our life.When someone ask for help,we should be willing to help them,but sometimes we should say "no" if person can help himself.Asfar as i'm concerned, because of there are some people are warm-heart,they always don't say "no",i think we should keep a center atitude,we should know the disadvantage of the not say "no".If one person don't say "no",others always depent on him,so he does not learn think of himself.What's worse,he doesn't live indepently. So,don't be afraid to say "no".

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