新东方托福高分作文:如何花钱?

作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用学术词汇，望继续努力；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

In my view of point, I would definitely choose going to concert. Others may laugh at my stupid, for the reason that a jewelry is much more lasting. But my thesis statement is that mental enjoyment is much more valuable than substance. Not only for the reason that jewelry will increase my burden, but also, mental happiness can directly relax ourselves and also cultivate our interests which we will benefits for our whole lives. From my childhood, I have been taught money cannot mean everything. What I want to say is that so does jewelry. We cannot trust jewelry can consistently bring us joy. Put in another word, it sometimes stands for extra burden. The more you gain, the worried you will be. While you are addicted to inhabiting of not losing them, you will worn out ultimately. For instance, when I first got my computer, I was so happy. Cause that kind computer is most expensive available computers for us students. So I began to worry to lose it. I refused to lend it to my friends and every day lock it into my safe. As you can image, all my roommates had started to look at me strangely. On the other hand, we can easily relax ourselves by choosing to see a concert. We can feel the strong beats bury us into a heaven of musics. After a crazy concert, any concerns can be gotten off. That is fantastic, and you will never regret going. Of course, you can cast a doubt on the weather we should just consume the money rather than find a way to reserve the value. That's pretty reasonable. However, I stand by the fact that mental enjoyment is the destination of our behaviors. Even though you pursue money at first, all the paying off will be shown in a form of satisfaction that's your mental happiness. So, why we cannot just find a way to make us happy now? Take my uncle as a illustration, he is a very prudent person never go to theater or restaurant. He saved a lot of money, nonetheless, he seldom fell happy. I nearly haven't seen his smile. I don't think it's worthwhile to save so much money in sacrifice our own enjoyments. Admittedly, for some people, touching gold or some kinds of jewelry like that can really amuse them. But that kind of people are minor. Most of us could only wear it to show off or take it as a reserve for future money. In a conclusion, I think relaxing and mental enjoyment obviously vote for the choice of going to a concert.