托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；文中衔接词丰富；文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

We live in the world,so every people is different,someone likes to broadcast anything what he receives,even he will fake something that isn't existed in fact just to achieve his some aims that isn't right to others,so we can't not trust any judgment,especilally some snap judgment. For example,during the Japanese nuclear leak period,it was so serious that all of people were anxious to find some way to improve their body protection,once received some message that was helpful for them,they were crazy to realize it.There was message that having more salt could prevent the infulence of the nuclear leak,many people were busy buying and conserving the salt,salt in the shop was all sold out.Someone who didn't have to chance to prepare more salt asked their friends to buy for them from the place far away.All the people were so nervous.At last the authority proved that having more salt wasn't helpful to protect ourself. So no matter what the messages or judgments were,we can't trust them snapply,we must analyse it and judge it by our brains.