2012年7月7日雅思大作文真题:广告对消费者的影响

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In this age of change,advertising has given rise to great public concern for the rapid progress of business.in the meantime,whether the advertising can make a contribution for consumers to purchers has sparked mush debates.some people assert that it can significantly promote the willings to buy the product as the advertisement is shown on TV,internet,and even in the famous markets,while others hold the opinion that it may direct into higher qualities due to its appealing advertisement.Personally,i am in favour of the former than the latter view. Convincing arguments can be made that most information we have got about products is from different kinds of advertisements,which means,a well-made advertisement can indeed catch more eyes than those without any advertisements,also as the rapid progress of information technology,it is much more often for us consumers have the access to the advertisements than ever before,meaning that the product,which is shown on the eyes for several times,people may would like to have a try,resulting in the more products bought Admittedly,good advertising can indeed promote the quality of the products,for more money being into the account,the company can use a part of money to improve the technology and therefore getting a better quality,however,not all companies will do that,when some of are famous for the advertisement,what they think is to spend more money on that in order to get more customer in instead of finding a way to keep this honor well, to make the product well,for example and eventually the company just go to die without a better quality. In summary,I would concede advertising really plays an important part in product quality,despite this,consuming choice is more influenced by this,in spite of the quality of the product