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Saving time is earing a life Nowadays,with the development of economy,more and more people lead a cozy and comfortable life.They spend their money in a uneconomical way,and seldom think about how to save it.However,in my opinion,I think that even if that now we have ecough economic condition to spend money in many aspects,we still have to save it and make a suitable money plan.My reasons can be listed as follows. On one hand,as students,the money which we spend is not what we earn by ourselves.We still depend on our parents,and that's the most important reason.We can't spend money in a casual way.It is hard for our parents to earn money for family,so we should't strengthen their burden.On the other hand,saving money can enable us to cultivate money concept.If we have own plan in money,we can invest them in appropriate ways. In a word,saving money is earning a life.If we can learn how to save money well,we can plan our life in a reasonable way.
