邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

From 2010,there are some violence incidents happened in China.And we are very shocked of it.We are all think deeply. But how can we improve school safety as well as we can?l think we should improve the ability of our security guard.In the campus,we should not hurt our classmates,because it will let us hurt our body. in my opinion, we should stop to hurt them.We must protect ourselves.Do you think so?