高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In my memory ,my hometown was full of beauty.There were a lot of green trees around it and the river was clean and clear.And there were so many fish jumping and swimming in it that we could catch the fish easily.However the house was too dirty and small to live . people's life was too hard.But everything has changed by the time,we have a great number of tall buildings and all sorts of services so that we get the comfortable life which we expected before.But something bad happens as well.Everyday we can see cars crowded in the street as the roads are wider and more smooth than that bofore.The development of diffrernt industries has the environment became worse.The number of trees is getting fewer and fewer.The fish has gone and all things that i liked have disappeared.To save the hometown,we are meant to deal with the polution first of all,or we'll lose the beauty forever!