2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者词汇量比较丰富，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；可以适当增加副词的使用。

All of us have long to make success,but few people can come true their dreams.What cause that?I think the reason is complexing but I can still list the essential point,which is most of them are fail to find the way to success. The importance of the correct way to lead to success is obvious,but what's the way to success?I think we can understand it in two ways.To degin with,the environment is an important part of the way of success.A favour enviroment will have a good influence on one's development,and it will be very helpful to gain one's knowledge.Furthurmore,the positive attituade is the vital element that to make success in one's live.The individual factor include hard working,a stronger will and good skills ect,which contributes to a wonderful life. In brief,the way to success is different for different people,but there is no way lead to success without a positive attituade toward work.And the way of success is in front of you if you can use of the good environment and have a stronger will.