2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(25)写作:翠湖公园

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and return at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant. The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You my also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.