3、信得开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Dear Sir, I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families tor the British students. Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, our large fully-equipped apartment answers all their needs.Apart from the convenient public transportation, our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest.With fluent English and an outgoing personality, I'm sure I will have no difficulty communicating with them.Above all, we hosted two British students last year, through which we've gained lots of experience.In addition, my mother's expert cooking can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food. I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them.Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua