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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中学术词汇表达比较恰当，但单词拼写不够认真。
With the advancement of modern technology and economy,a quantity of technologial products are appear in people's daily life.As a result of that,now people's lives is filled with a variety of information. According to the present situation,nobody can deny the truth that we are living in an age of information explosion.The impact of the information explosion for people is serious.For instance,now people is hard to be concenstrate when they are work on the computer because the screen is fulled by various information,which will attract people's eyes so that people are difficult to foucs on their works.Sometimes,people are confused by the information that is put online.There is more and more information,but people are become more and more ignorant.In other words,a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. In conclusion,in the age of information explosion,people will be misled easily by the information.So we must be careful when we research for news,to decrease the bad influences of information explosion.
