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Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and return at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.And the Cuihu park is on your right. The Cuihu park is very beautiful,there are many green trees and colouful flowers.And it makes you feel cool.We can swimming in the riverand have a picnic there. I hope the travel to Cuihu park have a good time.