文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写方面也要加强;文中句子错误比较多;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
We can see a sorts of AD when open the TV or on the internet for shopping and reading.Part of them can show us the lates product on sales. This is good for us to learn about it instruction or spec. But on the other side, the AD still influence us to buy some not goods for life.