小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

I have a good frends,his name is Jack.10 years old this year .he has brown hairs and dark brown eyes.he come from UAS ,His family have a big farm.he likes play basket ball,football. he alway help me learn english.help other students clean class room.he is a heart boy.we are very like him in our class.