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The pie chart contains information about the different sporting activities participated in by male students at Hamilton University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This pie chart shows the different proportions among vary sporting activities joint by male students at university. It has some features on this chart to illustrate the trends of students' interesting. Obviously,we can notice that the soccer has become the most popular activities,as it occupies the biggest area compared with other sporting activities, and followed by basketball,which is ranked the second with the rate of 25% .Then,Tennis,as its rate of 15% , is higher than volleyball and swimming.Both of tennis and swimming have the same proportion of 12.5%.However, athletics take over the least area on the picture,which can demonstrate that students more easily be attracted by competition sporting activities rather than pure athletic. In the conclusion,I think the most popular sporting,such as soccer and basketball,can be more available to motivate the students' activities.Besides,many sporting star also can promote their interesting on these sporting activities.School should help students promote their physical health by combining their hobbies on sports.
