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The pie chart contains information about the different sporting activities participated in by male students at Hamilton University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
学术词汇比较灵活，还要请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。
he pie chart shows the six sporting activities of male students at Hamilton University as a percentage of total participation. Overall, team sports make up over two thirds of sports played by the group, with a 67.5 per cent participation rate. Soccer is the most popular sport, with 30 per cent of students involved in this activity. This is followed by basketball, with 25 per cent participation. Tennis is the third most popular sport, with 15 per cent of students choosing this activity. Volleyball and swimming share equal popularity, each with 12.5 per cent participation, while the least popular sport, athletics, attracts only 5 per cent of male students at Hamilton University.
