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My favourite teacher In my life,there is a person that I will never forget,that's my favourite teacher. He is a little old with a pair of glasses and he is in short hair.He was very strict with us but he was friendly at the same time.Once,he gave me encouragement when I lost my faith.When I made progress in studying,he told me not to guard against conceit and rashness and keep on studying hard.However,he is retired at present,I will never forget him.He is a lighthouse when I feel there is no royal road to learning.